LR - Y11 Paper1

 1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to).

- WWW: Alanya, some klnowledge of denotation & connotation as media terminolegy in relation the unseen media context.

EBI: attempting every question in future assessments. I am unable to teoll you what to improve. This also tells me that you need to complete all blog work as you may have gaps in your knowledge.

2) Look at the mark scheme for this assessment. For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer.

• Excellent analysis of the product that is detailed and critically

engages with the nuanced aspects of how media language is

used.

• Focus on how connotations communicate meanings is thorough

and effective.

• Consistent appropriate and effective use of subject terminology

throughout.

3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main narrative theories and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP. 

• Good analysis of the product that is clear and generally engages

with the nuanced aspects of the narrative of the television advert

with mostly detailed reference to the CSP.

• Good use of the theoretical framework that demonstrates an

accurate understanding of how narratives are used to convey

messages to audience; mostly accurate application of narrative

theory.

• Mostly appropriate and effective use of subject terminology

throughout.

4) Now look at Question 4 - Tatler and social/cultural contexts. Use the mark scheme to identify three points you could have made in your answer here.

• Excellent knowledge and understanding of contexts and their

influence on media products and processes, demonstrated by

consistently effective explanation of how magazine covers reflect

the social and cultural contexts in which they were created.

• Consistently appropriate and effective reference to Tatler magazine

cover.

• Specialist terminology is used appropriately and effectively

throughout.

5) On Section B, focus on Question 7 - film industry and Black Widow. Use the mark scheme to identify three ways Black Widow was marketed to its audience.

• Excellent knowledge and understanding of the theoretical

framework, demonstrated by consistently effective explanation of

how big-budget films and marketed and promoted.

• Consistently appropriate and effective reference to the CSP.

• Consistently appropriate and effective use of subject specific

terminology throughout.

6) Finally, write down three things you are going to work on before your next mock exam in December (e.g. time management; revising CSPs etc.)

- Complete blog tasks, course work and revise basically everything.